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Demure Confidence

 

“….my speeding heartbeat still lingers,”

But it’s not debilitating, I just have to say something;

I can’t have this be another Jennifer,

Where I let a girl get away ‘cause of my laxity;

I get up from my chair slowly and walk over to her,

She looks at me curiously and I take the seat behind her, carefully,

“Um…..I hope this doesn’t sound too forward,”

Her eyebrows then furrow a bit, almost inquisitively,

“But do you maybe have a Facebook, or could I maybe have your number….?”

She then flashes that perfect smile (There goes my core skipping a beat),

And tells me how Facebook is the place where I could find her,

“Okay great, I’ll definitely catch ya’ on Facebook then.” I then smile gleefully,

And think to myself, “Looks like my speeding heartbeat still lingers….

But for a much better reason…..”

I can finally say a romantic-ish poem like this is true! :lmao: I've been dying to say something like that for a while now, but yeah. It's finally true! :dummy: I'm happy. :) Lol, that's all that really needs to be said. :lol:

This piece is funny though 'cause I originally had it planned out to be shorter and a free verse poem, but it sort of ended up rhyming accidentally. :lmao: How crazy is that? :XD:

But anywho, the first part of this poem was the last line of my quatrain, Too Quick so here's the link to that piece: [link]

(I hope you guys enjoy this! :))
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cality Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The first line of this definitely caught my eye. ;)

This is such a lovely continuation of Too Quick. :heart:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, that's what I was goin' for. :giggle:

And thank you so much. :heart:

I really appreciate the kind words, makes me smile. :D
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cality Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :aww:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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silvergabetha834 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Professional General Artist
Oh man I remember doing these kinds of things. I got good at it after a while lol. Never would have met my husband if I hadn't taken a chance like that. Good job!
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, yeah. :XD:

And that's great that you've found the love of your life. :aww: I always love hearing stuff like that, and I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts on this piece. I really appreciate you taking time out of your day to comment. :)

And finally, thank you! :D
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Lizzzzzy24 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Writer
This is so cute! Fingers crossed for you! :fingerscrossed: :heart:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thank you, my friend. :)
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What a wonderful continuation! I'm so happy for you, Ricky! :heart:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you think so, Madeline! :D

:huggle: :heart:
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