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Dream To Me

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Dream To Me

 

Dream to me, darling

Dream to me, honey

Tell me what it is you’re thinking

Let me into your unreal realities

Let me into your world which is full of abnormalities

Tell me what you’re thinking

Dream to me

What’s in your soul, that’s screaming

You never talk to me anymore

So do it by dreaming

Do it by feeling

What is it you’re thinking?

Is it a nightmare?

Does it pertain to reality?

Is it abstract?

Is it foreshadowing something?

Dream to me, darling

Dream to me, honey

Tell me what it is you’re thinking

I just wanna know what goes on in your mind

Is it scary? Are you frightened by what you see?

I can’t read your thoughts, so please don’t try to hide

Is it about us……me?

You say nothing and stare off into space

I look deep into your eyes and see little to nothing…….

I look at your soft features, emotionless, with nothing on your face

Your thoughts, somewhat of an enigma, so very puzzling

You close your eyes and inhale deeply

I hope for an answer soon, so I can stop wondering

But no answer is spoken of, so I continue to think

You give me a quick glance and exhale shakily

You then suddenly leave the room and prepare for sleep

Dream to me, darling

Dream to me, honey

Tell me what it is you’re thinking

So you can please stop my constant worrying

But as the night turns to light, the morning

My questions are answered

The brother of slumber, has finally spoken

You forever lay in eternal rest and your last words were uttered,

In your dream; and once I fell asleep, you finally explained everything to me,

“Darling, I’m dying….I look off into space because I feel the time is nearing,

Honey, I couldn’t speak because my dreams did my talking,

And now you finally know what it is I’m thinking…..”

And once I wake up to see you lying there still

I cry my soul out knowing your fate has just been sealed

This is somethin' experimental....sort of. I wanted to see if I could come up with a hook (Or chorus) for my poem. So it can truely fit the song category I always put my poetry under. And I'm really glad with the way this turned out. :D
I hope you guys enjoy this. :)

All feedback is appreciated; whether you love it, like it, or hate it, I wanna know what you guys think of this. :aww:

And the beat I used to write this entire poem/song to is Flying Lotus' Dream To Me. Unfortunately YouTube doesn't have the video of the song up, but maybe you guys could find the beat, elsewhere. It's truly spectacular. :)
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SpiralingSpontaneity's avatar
The rhythm and emotion in this are just gorgeous :love: I love it! :heart: