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Girls

 

This poem is for all the wonderful women, ladies, girls

And I think women actually may rule the world,

But humans of the female persuasion are more than pearls

They’re diamonds; critical to man and his kind, but if men do rule the Earth,

It’s probably a woman’s universe

And don’t let anyone tell you otherwise

The world is yours and you can do anything your heart desires

And to the stereotypes and prejudice, you ladies should throw to fire

You’re more than just a pretty face, an object of desire, or housewife

You’re not meant to just play with barbies or like pink, being into sports is more than fine

You’re far more than the exterior; you are the inside

You’re the soul and mind, the most important part of a human being

You’re more than a damsel in distress, you can be Katniss Everdeen

You can be the focus of the music that everyone sings

You can be the face of an entire nation, if you wanna be

If you apply yourself you can simply be anything

And don’t let anyone make you feel you’re worth less than what you deserve

You are a gift to this Earth; go out on your terms;

Not a man’s, another girl’s, or even the world’s

‘Cause remember, if this Earth isn’t your planet, you can own the universe

I was inspired to write this when I was listenin' to Shad's - "Keep Shining" and this sick story my dad told me about this politician. But I won't go on about that. :XD: This is just a positive writing about wonderful women. :) My two best friends are girls, and I'm proud to say that a few of the greatest blessings in my life are women. :aww: So just a corny-ish poem, writin' about women! :dummy:

All feedback is appreciated. Whether you love it, like it, or hate it; I wanna hear what you guys think of it. :)
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roup14 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014   Digital Artist
Heart touching lines Nod 
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Time-Signature Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Yes.  Just yes.
I love math (math is life!) but back in elementary they used to tease me incessantly about that (apparently short girls and math just didn't mix).  I showed them better by getting all the 1st place medals in all the contests...hah!
So.  Thank you for this lovely poem.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:lmao: Way to go, you! :love:
(And thank you so much. <3 )
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Time-Signature Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student General Artist
:)
Welcome!
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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lacymyra Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Artist
lol men have been writing about women since Adam and Eve. Good job on this :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, they're pretty important. :giggle:
But in all seriousness, thank you so much. :)
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lacymyra Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Artist
lol no prob. It's nice to run into a guy that believes girls actually have potential.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All people do. At least an inkling. It's all about finding it, right? :aww:
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