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Lead In Tresses

 

As my pencil hits the page and I’m busy transcribing “The Key,”

I can’t help but daydream about the future with the girl of my fantasy,

I often wonder if she’d be a writer herself, if she’d be interested in this great activity,

If she’d be interested in what I’m writing, my inner thoughts and if she’d be willing to read ‘em,

Do her eyes sparkle when she learns that she may be my next poetic subject?

Would she look over my shoulder as I ponder which utensil, I’d use: Pencil or pen?

Will she be interested in me professing my deepest emotions for her through my poetry,

And if she wrote, what style does she write in, most often?

Is she a free verse kind of a girl who doesn’t like restrictions, or does she enjoy some type of structure?

Does she find the most pleasure in writing haikus, poetry, prose, or stories of fantasy?

Or maybe dark, abstract tales that a need 2 or 3 reads before you uncover it’s true meaning,

When she can’t find the right word, does she have any unique quirks?

Does she tap the pencil against her little chin?

Twirl it around in her slender fingers?

Close her eyes and focus on that little light bulb in her head to turn back on, again,

Or would she be like me, take my shirt and nibble on the collar?

What would be her muse to take her to a place of inspiration?

Would it be a dark place of anger, sadness, and depression?

Would it be one of joy, happiness, and elation?

Is it blue skies, white lights, or golden stars that dance and twinkle within the black?

The wings of an eagle that fly hard and fast?

Or a musical creation of some kind, something to the tune of, “Summers Never Seem To Last,”

Aaah, maybe one day this fantasy will be a reality,

That I’ll have a beautiful girl’s hand to hold,

And maybe she’s interested in the art of prosody like I am,

Perhaps even prefer little lead marks on her fingers,

Or maybe just a tiny little inkling of lead in her tresses

 

So I'm transcribing "The Key," (As I mentioned in the poem) and the inspiration for this just hit me. And I've been really wanting to write a romantic poem and this is what I got. The scent of pencil lead inspired this piece, honestly. Well, THAT, and MF DOOM beats. :D I really enjoyed writing this piece. And this is actually a tiny dream of mine. :blush:

I hope you guys enjoy this piece. :aww:

(And yes, the style in which I wrote, the breaking in out and of rhyme was intentional.)
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ameliemj Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful:)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much <3
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Kurosaki224 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is lovely! Fun and beautiful at the same time :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I'm glad you think so. :D
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Kurosaki224 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :) I like how you wander through her personality.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to hear that. :D
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Kurosaki224 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey Ricky! Your piece has been featured here: [link] :floating:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, that's great! Thank you so much, Windy! I'll check it out, now. :D
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem! xD
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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TheImpossibleWriter Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow nicely written
What a great imagination
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :iconbowplz:
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TheImpossibleWriter Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE THIS.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I'm so glad to hear that, my friend. :iconbowplz:
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GoblinWort Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it, always best when from the heart and you nailed it. Great job.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely, man. And thank you so much; I'm glad you liked this. :iconbowplz:
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CupofCharlie Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful :) :heart:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, my friend. :hug:
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CupofCharlie Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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tigergirl198 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really well done, great job! I often think something along these lines as well! ^ ^
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :)
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tigergirl198 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
You're very welcome! ^ ^
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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