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Dogs lie, but ribs don't break.

This idea hit me a couple of hours ago, but I wanted to write this message in a way not many would understand. The message in this is quite clear if you read between the lines. But I'd be happy to hear any and all interpretations because I really want to know if anyone will be able to understand what I mean with this. :)
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Taking the title into account as well, this made me think of the idiom 'let sleeping dogs lie', especially with the 'ribs don't break' part (due to what the idiom means). With the first two words being 'Dogs lie', I kind of wonder whether you mean 'lie' as in 'lie down' or 'lie' as in 'tell an untruth' (in which case 'dog' could mean something else...). Not that that this matters too much, as interpretation is the really interesting thing when it comes to poetry like this. :la:

Anyway, great work. :D