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The End Of Us

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The End Of Us

 

This is the end of us; you and me,

You and I; no more together or between

No more pair, no more couple, I suppose it wasn’t meant to be

I can’t say it’s you or me,

Us together just wasn’t a part of our destiny

I won’t blame you for losing control of your emotions

Or believing I wasted your precious time

But us ending……believe me, was not my intention

I truly believed we’d be forever, longer than even eternity

But we’ve grown distant and our love has evaporated…..

I don’t have much to say, but this one thing: “Please don‘t hate me.”

Because I honestly loved you with all of my being

But sometimes love simply isn’t enough, when someone’s unhappy

I guess I settled down too quickly…….

Maybe I wasn’t ready for a true commitment

I felt…….trapped here, not by you…….but here

This place was choking me……I guess I got some issues to deal with

Please don’t believe me to be a cold or callous traitor

I’m doing this for the both of us

You may not see it now, but you’ll see it later

I’m not the man you believed me to be

You’ll soon find someone far better

2nd drawer on the right……our old bedroom dresser

What you’ll find is a letter……explaining my departure

I cry myself to sleep on this plane

Thinkin’ about your trembling hands and tear-stained face,

While reading my goodbye

But I promise you this, I’ll love you till the day I die

And I hope you believe me ’cause the last thing I want is for you to hate me

I get inspiration to write certain things at such weird times! :XD: And I honestly have no clue what brought on this type of poem, but it just sort of happened. :shrug: I've always been a fan of angsty, romantic fanfictions but that's about the closest I've gotten to depressing romance-type stuff. :XD: This was really experimental for me and I hope people enjoy this. Also, I left out the "ending" or what the guy did, intentionally. I thought it'd be cool to see what others thought the guy did or didn't do. :D

And if this were to have a beat it'd be Ras Kass' Understandable Smooth. This beat is dark enough, but groovy enough to fit this poem. :) Plus, it's just dope. :lmao:

Here's the link to the song: [link]

And please guys let me know what y'all think of this. Whether you love it, like it, or hate it. All feedback is appreciated. :)
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shep4life's avatar
This explains well many breakups...I have many like this lol