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curious, curious
the hang is luring,
syllables rolling
from lips alluring.

quips quick
with whispers that linger
softly in the air
and i'm hang-
ing on the edge
of your next words.

old muse, new views
this poetic motion
glides whimsical;
with a hummingbird quickness
that auras over my eyelids.
you speak in tongues
that rings in configured eights, 
and i am awfully inquisitive
about exploring your lemniscate.
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seekerofsigns Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I especially like the stanza in the Notes. You have some delightful wordplay and alliteration here, and as always your flow is so so good.
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yuMmychocolateBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Artist
Such pretty words ^-^
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