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candid is easily digestible, mostly detestable

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i am the stray hair
i pull out of my head
when i run my hand
through my kinks.

(and magically believe
that i am going bald.)

you know,
that thing that people
really don't enjoy
thinking about 
because it gives off
the perception that they
are not good enough.

or something deep like that.
more pseudo-philosophical, quasi-intellectual, uninventive minalism on the thing that makes my poetry either fantastic or disgusting?
i don't like lying to you guys so why start now? i am everything you see and everything i choose not to disclose so as to not cause discourse.
but i've disclosed essentially everything so, hello for those that are gonna stick around.
ยฉ 2015 - 2024 chromeantennae
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
I feel that this poem could be better if it was given a bit more depth, a direction, and an overall setting. Just saying that as is, its too generic and open to interpretation (unless that was what you had intended). I think you've written a good poem, but I feel it could be better, if those improvements were provided.